I had to write lyric poem for my creative writing class; here is what I came up with:
Edmund's Song
The sunrise
Golden and new
Speaks of fresh life
That I found in You
I was selfish, a traitor
Your name I did hate
So I sided with her
Surely it was too late
Yet You came to save me
You died in my place
What love and what mercy
Could show me such Grace?
Such wonderful glorious Grace
Unworthy was I
Still on stone You did die
So forgiven I'll stand,
Your Beloved,
Just as You planned
Such wonderful glorious Grace
I'll sing now for eternity
That You died in my place
For Your love and your mercy
Should show me such Grace
Such wonderful glorious Grace
Your wonderful glorious Grace
O Aslan my King
Edmund's Song (A Poem)
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Re: Edmund's Song (A Poem)
Simple, but profound.
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lyrics from TobyMac's "New World"
lyrics from TobyMac's "New World"
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Wow! I'd love to hear music written to it!
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Re: Edmund's Song (A Poem)
Thank you Engee! I'd like to put music to it but I wouldn't know how to go about it in the slightest.