Because He Loves Me, poem

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Because He Loves Me, poem

Post by Quill Jill » Mon Oct 13, 2014 11:59 pm

Just a little poem I wrote from Edmund's point of view and how Aslan died for him.


I see the Stone Table where Aslan died
He did it for me and all of my lies

"It should have been me," I whisper through tears
I don't really care if the others can hear

His words come out from where they've been hid
"I know you, I love you, despite what you did."

I swallow as I touch the stone
Now I'll never be alone

This is why He died that night
Because he loves me, I know that's right.
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Re: Because He Loves Me, poem

Post by jesusgirl4ever » Tue Oct 14, 2014 12:35 am

Oh, that's beautiful, QJ!
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Re: Because He Loves Me, poem

Post by cor » Tue Oct 14, 2014 1:40 am

LOVE IT! :D
*is such a cocky shapechanger*
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Re: Because He Loves Me, poem

Post by Quill Jill » Tue Oct 14, 2014 5:21 pm

Thank you! :)
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