This definitely needs work.
https://www.fanfiction.net/s/13290645/1/I-am-a-Jedi
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I am a Jedi
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knightofnarnia
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I am a Jedi
And whoever will be chief shall be servant of all (Mark 10:44 my version)
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Re: I am a Jedi
I’ve dropped a note on the story itself, for as far as I’ve read it. If someone more interested in Star Wars than I would do the same, I’m sure knight would really appreciate feedback from a fellow fan. 
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lyrics from TobyMac's "New World"
lyrics from TobyMac's "New World"
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knightofnarnia
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Re: I am a Jedi
thanks Ariel it is good that you posted your review
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