In the Morning: A Cat’s Tale

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In the Morning: A Cat’s Tale

Post by jesusgirl4ever » Tue Jan 06, 2015 2:02 pm

Blame my literature teacher for this short piece of silliness, not me. :D

In the Morning: A Cat’s Tale
The humans are stirring, I realize, as I stretch my paws and blink the sleep from my eyes, the orange sun just breaking over the horizon. A quiet meow escapes my mouth before I leap up onto the ledge where I can peer into the place where the humans live. My girl is watching the odd folding thing, her front paws pushing the little buttons. I try to scratch the clear object separating us, try to tell her how hungry I am, but she can’t hear me. She glances up and sees me, though, and lifts one of her paws as if to tell me hello. I cry louder, and she smiles before putting the folding thing down and rising, walking into the other room, the one that leads onto the place where she feeds us. I race to jump onto the other, higher ledge, the one my brother cannot reach, just in time to see her coming with the cup full of food in her paw. I bound to the ground and rub against her as she steps out. “Good morning, you silly cat!” she says, pouring the food into the bowls for Edmund and me. I purr my thanks as I begin to eat.
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Re: In the Morning: A Cat’s Tale

Post by narniac101 » Tue Jan 06, 2015 10:52 pm

Your cat is a good writer! :P Did it take all that to get you to feed him?
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Post by jesusgirl4ever » Tue Jan 06, 2015 11:31 pm

Do you mean did it take that long for me to feed her? Yes. ;)
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Post by narniac101 » Tue Jan 06, 2015 11:38 pm

:P

I meant, did you make the cat write the story before you would feed it? :)
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Re: In the Morning: A Cat’s Tale

Post by jesusgirl4ever » Tue Jan 06, 2015 11:42 pm

Nope, I didn't, as much as I would have liked to make Lucy do my lit homework. :P
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Re: In the Morning: A Cat’s Tale

Post by narniac101 » Tue Jan 06, 2015 11:45 pm

:lol:

It would be nice if I could make my dog do my math.......

That's cool that your cats are named Edmund and Lucy!! :D
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Post by jesusgirl4ever » Tue Jan 06, 2015 11:48 pm

:lol:

Yup, had to name them after Narnia!
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Re: In the Morning: A Cat’s Tale

Post by Tenethia » Wed Jan 07, 2015 6:42 am

nice, Jaygee :D
(slightly confused about the identity of the /folding thing/ though ;)) otherwise, nicely written :D I love the cat just wants food. Sounds like /my/ cat!
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Re: In the Morning: A Cat’s Tale

Post by elanorelle » Wed Jan 07, 2015 8:14 am

I think you just wrote what happens to me every day. :lol: Great job capturing the mind of a cat.
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Re: In the Morning: A Cat’s Tale

Post by jesusgirl4ever » Wed Jan 07, 2015 11:28 am

@Tenny: The "folding thing" is my laptop.

Speaking of my cats, I need to go put them outside (it was really cold last night)... *goes* *comes back* Y'know, they like being inside until I put them in the laundry room for the night... they really hate that. ;)
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