A Girl Leaned Over a Book

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A Girl Leaned Over a Book

Post by jesusgirl4ever » Wed Jan 07, 2015 2:12 pm

A sort of parody of "A Bird Came Down the Walk" by Emily Dickinson. (And, yes, you can blame my lit teacher for this one, too. ;) )

A girl leaned over a book---
She did not know I saw---
She turned a page rapidly,
Her eyes widening with awe.

And then she leaned toward the light,
Needing just a little more---
She began to bite her lip,
Captured to her core.

Her eyes across the words flew,
Her wonder rising fast---
She looked, I thought, to be immersed
In images of the past.

I slowly sank to the ground.
Though I was very quiet, I was sure
She couldn’t hear a sound,
So much was she allured.

No noise could ever disturb her there,
Not a danger or a care,
For she was far away on an adventure
That she could only dream of here.
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Re: A Girl Leaned Over a Book

Post by narniac101 » Wed Jan 07, 2015 8:52 pm

Oh me, oh my! THAT IS WONDERFUL. I've never read the one you said it was sort of a parody of, though.

I wish I could make stuff rhyme like that! :)
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Post by jesusgirl4ever » Wed Jan 07, 2015 8:57 pm

Thanks, Nia. :D
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Post by hobbit_of_narnia » Wed Jan 07, 2015 9:29 pm

Sounds like me when I'm reading a book for the first time. :P
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Post by jesusgirl4ever » Wed Jan 07, 2015 9:38 pm

Thanks, hobbit!
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Post by Ariel.of.Narnia » Thu Jan 08, 2015 1:44 am

I love it! So true. :D
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Post by jesusgirl4ever » Thu Jan 08, 2015 10:59 pm

Thanks, Ariel!
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Re: A Girl Leaned Over a Book

Post by gypsevedius » Sun Jan 11, 2015 1:39 am

It's like... enchanting! Maybe I'll go read now. :lol:
If you see a typo in this message, let me know. *facepalm*
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Re: A Girl Leaned Over a Book

Post by jesusgirl4ever » Sun Jan 11, 2015 2:18 am

Thanks, Gypsy!
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