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Post by featherfish » Tue Dec 13, 2016 5:26 pm

the first two lines of this poem are from a tyler joseph song.

I know it might be a little selfish of me to say,
But i need to know if you’ve thought of me at all today,
Because every morning when i get up
It’s harder to know i’m loved,
And every time i fall down
It seems easier to stay on the ground,
And every word that you speak
Seems to come from a dream
Because there’s no way in reality
That there’s a person who cares about me,
Whenever morning comes
And i see what i’ve done
Where my mind has led me:
Red stains on my sheets
Where my mind has bled
While i laid in bed.
And I know it might be a little selfish of me to think,
But sometimes i wish that i could fall from the brink,
And i wonder if anybody would know i’m gone,
And i wonder if you, my friend, would come
Over today
Because i just need a break
And to know that someone
Thought of me today.
*is such an emo sprite*
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Post by anunknownpevensie » Wed Dec 14, 2016 8:27 am

Is this a thread for ANY song or poem? ;P

I quite like that, @featherfish.
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Post by featherfish » Wed Dec 14, 2016 4:02 pm

no, for mine. :P you can make a thread for your own, though. ;)

thanks. :P
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Post by Ariel.of.Narnia » Fri Dec 16, 2016 5:18 am

Really sad, that, but heartfelt. Good job, Pev! (One teeny note of criticism: it should be "lay" in bed, not "laid". "Laid" would be the past tense of putting a direct object down, while "lay" is the past tense of the subject going down.)
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Post by featherfish » Fri Dec 16, 2016 7:52 pm

thanks! ^.^

(oh, and also thanks for the grammar note. :facepalm: )
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Post by Ariel.of.Narnia » Sat Dec 17, 2016 12:33 am

Pleasure! :)
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