What happened to Narnia after the Royal Siblings disappeared? This is an account of what I believe happened.
URL | http://www.fanfiction.net/s/1555601/1/ |
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Creator | UnicornAmy |
Description | What happened to Narnia after the Royal Siblings disappeared? This is an account of what I believe happened. |
Complete | no |
Published | 10/12/2003 |
This story had a good plot and it fitted well with the other stories. I would say you need some more elaboration and maybe a better ending.
Loved it.
It was actually ok. I mean, she had a great idea, but she just left off at the end of the page. she should have made a chapter 2. Still, a great plot and story. 😉
Quite good Could have been better not so long less than a whole page but a good start
I love the idea. But,would Mr. Beaver have Counselors?