A funny misunderstand leads Peter to set Susan up on a date with the boy from the subway station
URL | http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4475454/1/When_Clive_Met_Phyllis |
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Creator | LucyCrewe11 |
Description | A funny misunderstand leads Peter to set Susan up on a date with the boy from the subway station |
Complete | yes |
Published | 08/15/2008 |
This is a really funny story! Thank you for this wonderful story, LucyCrewe11.
Hehehe!!! so funny! A great ending to what happened to the nerdy guy at the train station.
;-D
I actually did NOT like this at all.
I fear for my life but the storyline was not the best. I know you can do better! I beleive in you! ^_^
Hi LucyCrewe11, Oh, I absolutely loved it and it is so funny!(esp. the whole joke about Rabadash..hehe) The perspective changes were cool. It might be good to put in a line divider or something in between some of the big scene changes. And really, only yo