Swanwhite's Scribblage

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Swanwhite's Scribblage

Post by Swanwhite » Fri Dec 13, 2013 6:19 pm

Just to be a copy cat :) or would it be a copy-unicorn?
Will probably mostly put poetry here, maybe some short stories and excerpts of longer stuff, scripts, maybe song lyrics. If you read, I always appreciate hearing what you liked and what you didn't like 'cause it will help to know.

If you know my poetry, you know I like to rhyme so this piece may come as a surprise. I'm trying new stuff :) but I shan't abandon my rhyming ways.

What is in a Name?

I have something for you.
It is a sound.
It is mine,
but you can have it without my losing it one bit.

I'll stick it in your ear,
and you can run it around your mind,
and let it slide off your tongue
as often as you like.

It was made for me,
but I make it too
with every path I take,
the things I've done and the things I do.

You can play with it,
shorten it,
or stretch it out.
You can make it your own,
but it will always be mine
so long as you mean me when you use it.

But I will understand if you misplace it.
I will not blame you if you drop it.
It is a slippery thing when new,
and I can always give it back to you again.

And if in passing time
you learn my face,
and map the workings of my mind
the sound will deepen and fill
with everything you put there.

And there is just one thing,
I would ask in return.
Just one request,
if you’d be so kind.
Would you give me also
a sound that means you,
a sound I could fill and hold on to?
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Re: Swanwhite's Scribblage

Post by Petraverd » Fri Dec 20, 2013 3:44 pm

Swanwhite wrote: But I will understand if you misplace it.
I will not blame you if you drop it.
It is a slippery thing when new,
and I can always give it back to you again.
"The name's Puddleglum. But it's all right if you forget it, I can always tell you again..."

Being one of those who goes bonkers just trying to pick THE RIGHT NAME for characters, I really like this a lot. Not quite your usual style, as you say, but I think that adds to the effect, honestly.
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Re: Swanwhite's Scribblage

Post by Ariel.of.Narnia » Tue Jan 14, 2014 2:09 am

*grins*
And what Petra said. :D
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Re: Swanwhite's Scribblage

Post by Lil » Wed Jan 22, 2014 2:24 pm

I love it! And Puddleglum! Yeah, what they said.
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Re: Swanwhite's Scribblage

Post by Beautiful Dreamer » Mon Jan 27, 2014 9:33 am

I'm late to the fanfare, Swanny, but hopefully no less earnest! I completely love it!! Whimsical and meaningful at the same time ^.^
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