This is my Narnia fanfiction inspired by the story of Jesus walking on the water in Matthew 14.
The idea first came to me while listening to Britt Nicole's Walk on the Water (hence the title).
I then opened my Bible and read from Matthew 14 and an idea formed in my mind, and that's how this fanfiction got written. 🙂
It's one of my very first Narnia fanifctions, so I really would appreciate some feedback.
https://www.fanfiction.net/s/10220556/1/Walk-on-The-Water
It's a sweet idea, Lilliandil, to have Susan tell grandchildren of Narnia and the dialogue between Susan and Amy is nice.
"How do you know that exact time, Nan?"
"Because Queen Susan kept a record. It always happened exactly thirty-eight minutes after breakfast. Anyway, where was I?"
I am kind of wondering why Peter thought everyone else was speaking nonsense.
I'm also wondering if Susan's retelling of the story would be nicer if it had some quotes from Peter, Ed, Lu, and Su. Children's stories seem to often have memorable quotes. This is just an idea, and I'm not an English major so I might be wrong here, though.
Jesus answered, "I am the way and the truth and the life. No one comes to the Father except through Me. If you really knew Me, you would know My Father as well." - John 14:6-7a
