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(@jesusgirl4ever)
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A sort of parody of "A Bird Came Down the Walk" by Emily Dickinson. (And, yes, you can blame my lit teacher for this one, too. πŸ˜‰ )

A girl leaned over a book---
She did not know I saw---
She turned a page rapidly,
Her eyes widening with awe.

And then she leaned toward the light,
Needing just a little more---
She began to bite her lip,
Captured to her core.

Her eyes across the words flew,
Her wonder rising fast---
She looked, I thought, to be immersed
In images of the past.

I slowly sank to the ground.
Though I was very quiet, I was sure
She couldn’t hear a sound,
So much was she allured.

No noise could ever disturb her there,
Not a danger or a care,
For she was far away on an adventure
That she could only dream of here.


   
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narniac101
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Oh me, oh my! THAT IS WONDERFUL. I've never read the one you said it was sort of a parody of, though.

I wish I could make stuff rhyme like that! πŸ™‚


Thank you, Hobbit!


   
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(@jesusgirl4ever)
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Thanks, Nia. πŸ˜€


   
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(@hobbit_of_narnia)
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Sounds like me when I'm reading a book for the first time. πŸ˜›


   
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(@jesusgirl4ever)
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Thanks, hobbit!


   
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(@ariel-of-narnia)
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I love it! So true. πŸ˜€


   
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Thanks, Ariel!


   
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(@gypsevedius)
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It's like... enchanting! Maybe I'll go read now. πŸ˜†


   
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Thanks, Gypsy!


   
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