Okay, the Uncle Andrew one is hilariously spot-on!(I would recommend that updates be made in new posts so we can all see new stuff, and maybe even con...

@Netty: Yeah, we tend to be into a lot of things around here. :DRegarding your story character, I’d suggest giving her flaws and agency (the ability t...

Oh wow, that’s quite the story! Edmund is indeed super relatable to all those who have walked his path (and he’s a great character besides!). My favou...

It’ll be better to add on to the story as replies. That way, any comments made on the way will clearly connect to the portions of story preceding them...

Please continue to post your story in this thread. That way, it could be read as a whole later.

Hi, Netty! I’m Ariel, one of the staffers here. I’ll occasionally pop into the chat, but I’m more of a forum person. I write fanfics as well, though n...

Polly

Interesting, brown just being taken for granted like that. Is it really cheating if that’s really how you imagine Peter, though? 😉

Ahh, exciting! (Also you and gyps being an aunt and mom, respectively. *mind-blown*)

Hm, that’s possible. My hair is lighter now than when I was very little (though I’m sure not anywhere near blonde). Back in the day, people would ask ...

Wow! I like the little details like Jill’s rolled-up sock and the dirt stains on Eustace’s pants!

Of those, the ones about Cor’s kidnapping and the search for Rilian are what spark my interest most!

Polly made her first full-sized tarts.