Lily of Archenland
Lily of Archenland
@lily-of-archenland
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Joined: Oct 4, 2012
Last seen: May 31, 2026
Topics: 20 / Replies: 588
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Re: Summer Challenge Sharing Thread - 2023 'The Voyage of the Dawn Treader'

Chapter 14Table of HopeThe clock turns backwards gently, at the table.An ancient silver Star's returning, day by day, to youth.Sunbirds flock to anoth...

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Re: Summer Challenge Sharing Thread - 2023 'The Voyage of the Dawn Treader'

I hadn't considered that Aslan's invisibility was evidence of the spells shortness, Ariel; I just assumed the spell effects were highly localized, and...

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Re: Summer Challenge Sharing Thread - 2023 'The Voyage of the Dawn Treader'

This... was a hard one.Chapter 12The Dark IslandThey pushed into the Dark with their eyes wide open.It swallowed their ship like a long black mouth.On...

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Re: Summer Challenge Sharing Thread - 2023 'The Voyage of the Dawn Treader'

Chapter 11Meeting the MagicianHe isn't the Tyrant they say he is –or at least, he isn't now.What sins a starry exile makeAre only a Star's to know.He ...

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Re: Summer Challenge Sharing Thread - 2023 'The Voyage of the Dawn Treader'

Thanks much for the input, Ajjie! My 8th is rather small...Chapter 8Deadly BeautyGlitter and gleam of strangely shining things –Curses can be beautifu...

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Re: Summer Challenge Sharing Thread - 2023 'The Voyage of the Dawn Treader'

Chapter 7Claws and WaterSand-scrawling has its disadvantages When you are trying to write your own story,And you don't know how to write a story,And y...

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Re: Summer Challenge Sharing Thread - 2023 'The Voyage of the Dawn Treader'

Chapter 3"Same Old"They came ashore for a lark(And it was singing!),And to dig bare toes into the warm sand,And relax in the echo Of a memory ringing....

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Re: Summer Challenge Sharing Thread - 2023 'The Voyage of the Dawn Treader'

Chapter 2A Year and a DayHe set himself a deadline,Not knowing where it lead–How wide the world he wandered,And him the headOf state.His country had t...

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Re: Summer Challenge Sharing Thread - 2023 'The Voyage of the Dawn Treader'

Chapter 1(Clarence)Eustace blessed with complicated name,Stodgy and unwieldy and strange —From the beginning there's hope, just the same.Light shines ...

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Re: Lily's NaPo 2023

A Love-poem from The Strays and Rescues[4/30/23]Sometimes love walks up to your doorOn four feet.Sometimes you find that it only neededA kind hand to ...

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May the Good Times Last4/27/23Please don't leave me,Please don't go away.Please don't be the next oneOn the list of broken dreams.I'm so ashamed to be...

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Editing4/27/23I always pare down my edges for acceptability.Who I'm talking to only determines how severely. Everyone has their limits, even in therap...

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I Found Rest in You4/27/23This city might not be my home, but you are,I thought as I lay beside you on your bed.My nerves constrained me from explorin...

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Susan's Second Adolescence4/25/23Of course we don't react the sameWhen our throne's a broken memory,And the golden dream vanishesIn the cold grey Engl...

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Bonsai Apples[4/24/23]I used to feel proud on behalfOf a bonsai apple tree.If it could bear fruit I could too,No matter how small I might be.But somet...

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