Note: I didn't actually intend the symmetry of the end of the first poem and the title of the second, but I left them that way because it fit.---Withi...

Thanks for checking in on me, Swannie! Always a pleasure to have you reading. ^_^ And thank you for the kind comments, as well.The second stanza in Se...

"Teach us to pray."4/22/2018Loving first-family and Maker of me,As high and far as the sun you seem.Too strange and sacred, great and grandFor me to e...

Got to love it when the moment's right and inspiration strikes. 🙂

self-fulfilling prophecy4/19/2018They called us a storm.Crushed into this desert dust,I will bring the rain.“Like seeds, like soil, like stars”4/20/20...

Thank you, Hobbity-friend! ^_^Setting bait4/18/2018Roughly, on temptation and the ways we can be lured and teased into doing what we know is unwise, w...

Huh... I hadn't thought about the Giants' potential to effect things!Would she have *wanted* to solicit proper normal food in mass for her subjects, t...

I know this is an old thread - but, good use made of inspiration from some fascinating timing! I like how you make me picture the town you are walking...

A good slice of life. I like how you explore the character's motivations for initially avoiding taking a position in the ministry.

It DOES feel potentially very songlike - the call-and-refrain format lends itself well to that I think. :)And you captured some great emotion here, an...

Thanks, Hobbit! <3 ...And that's fine, I just figured I'd fish for possibilities. :)---Sister Devil4/11/2018Sister Devil, are you coming out to pla...

college-corner cafe4/10/2018I visit a silly, babbly sort of refugeFull of stranger’s talk and muffled musicWith sweet and pungent smells at its centri...

Thank you, Ariel. <3...I'm a little behind for now but if I double up for the next couple days I should be good I think. ^_^I have a couple of newb...

Thanks for the comments, friends. 🙂 Ariel - I doubt they will fade on their own, but I am getting help in dealing with the source.at home4/4/2018For...

I still haven't had it! I had sorta given up on being interested after reading a number of disappointed American reviews but then a dear British frien...