I like what you have so far. The little community of found family with powers, and the looming threat over them - good flavor there. I like the use of...

Thanks, Hobbit. 🙂 I always love it when I see someone else's poetry with a strong "voice", so it's fun to know I can come across that way! ^_^I've be...

It sounds like that could be a fun premise, and good luck. :)A friend and I used to be working on an "adventures in a virtual world" sort of project, ...

The last four lines ring in me.

Accompanied[4/25/2017]I nest in the pre-morning quiet，Deep burrow of pillows and pale new lightThrough the dusty blinds，Fan blades like heartbeats，Twi...

Ghost voices[4/23/2017]Your words are empty.You can`t own me.You`re all shattered glassAnd huddled fear，Tears spent and darkness passed.Your voice may...

New for Old[4/23/2017]The sounds will change,I know. I’ll Stop taking it for granted,The rhythms of this house around me,16 years within these walls(w...

Sorry that was... being hypercritical of myself in response to a compliment, kind rude on my part. <.< You're a cool human and I'm glad you like...

...The haphazard semi0-rhyming kind? 😉 I have exactly one poem in this batch so far following a traditional format. :p I just - want the rhythm to ma...

...I touched up the wording a couple of times on that last one and I think I have the words about where I want them but it still doesn't scan right wh...

Strange hope (v2)[4/17/2017]There’s no poetry in painIn the moment when it hits you,No fancy words for broken trustUnless the ache is past.Someone des...

Thanks, Hobbit. ^_^...It's not Technically morning yet. But. There was a sunrise photo I had queued up for social media for Easter and I started feeli...

It's always cool to see your stuff, Hobbit. 🙂

Saturday Night[4/15/2017]I am not safe, and I don’t know if I’m good.I’m toying with paints on the edge of a story of bloodAnd long dark waiting, hopi...

"The moss-green roots of the goblin treesSlithered in the dark." -Oh, GOOD line."I know at the end of the afternoon woodThere lies a silver shore." - ...