Replacing the Creator with herself -- she really is a fan of old Serpent tricks, isn't she? --- Chapter 12 (Any World but Mine) She denies there...

Begging pardon,when I made my horror comment I wasn't considering The Dark Island in VDT! But honestly I still feel like the layers of Wrong here are ...

Good golly that was a raw chapter, thinking much on it almost makes me wince. This sequence -- the foreshadowing of all the ways she's hiding his iden...

Ugh. Editing expired before I finished typing my edit! But. One bit of speculation that caught my breath this time. The Knight's comment about his...

Chapter 10 (Underland) Deeper now, and ever deeper, Creeps the silentest of armies. Grim Marchwarden marches you To his grand and dreadful kee...

It's good to see your progress, Ajjie! That the same yarn you used on giraffes? ... I felt like there were thematic Layers and echoes in this chap...

Chapter 8 Well and truly locked away From the part you're meant to play, Now it's time to grin a mask And don a grand charade. Somehow y...

Chapter 7 (into the hands of giants) Now you're fumbling, Suddenly tumbling Down into the queerest hole. Wind and weather Drive you whet...

Chapter 6 What counts as gentleness in Giants – or civility in ogres? Will they treat you as an equal, say, Or keep you as a pet? Are they n...

@renegadeoftheshire Oh, welcome aboard Renegade! Great to see some new art coming into the thread, and cheers for being willing to jump in late!

Chapter 5 Looming doom will make you cheery Though your views are rather dreary Puddleglum, Puddleglum. Too hopeful for a Wiggle's part, ...

Ducktales 2017 complete! I continued to like it -- good balance on the goofy and earnest, and a twist or two in the climax that enhanced characterizat...

(Chapter 4: Green Light) Know this: her poison shines. She killed the light of stars. She leads your heart beneath the mines. She slinks b...

(Chapter 3: Red at Night) The sunset was red at the close of the day, And so was the ship, as the King went away. He was well in the evening of ...

@ariel-of-narnia A lovely take on Himself, with that almost cloud-like mane. I am afraid I have a little trouble "reading" the departure scene. @ajn...