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Aslan helps Lucy. Read to find out how.

URL http://www.fanfiction.net/s/1722235/1/
Creator Hades\'Queen
Description Aslan helps Lucy. Read to find out how.
Complete yes
Published 02/07/2004

9 Comments

  1. Anastasia the Faun

    This second part of the story, and the first part before it, are both quite interesting. But it seems a little weird to be having Aslan romantically interested in Lucy. Oh, and according to the timeline, she is supposed to be about twenty, if this story i

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  2. I am cool

    That was such a good stroy i could never right anything like it.

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  3. NarnianQueen

    Even worse than the first story. Aslan would never, ever fall in love with Lucy. Or anyone for that matter. This is a crime to write about!!!

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  4. Lampost Hugger

    I am enraged to speechlessness! Allthough I still have plenty to say. Do you even know who Aslan is to be portrayed as?! King of Kings and such! C.S. Lewis made it that way for people to make the conection and you are ruining it!!!! This story is practic

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  5. Renee

    This was WORSE that the first story BY FAR. Aslan is about a million years older than Lucy, besides, he is the God in Narnia. This story made me FURIOUS!!!!!

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  6. Mara Jade

    Um…lets just say that this pairs Lucy with Aslan. Really really bad idea since Aslan is basically an image of Jesus. I was uncomfortable reading it.

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  7. ~Me~

    O MY CRUNCHY GOODNESS! I feel like Reepicheep did when he was captured by Pug and his men! He had so many things that he wanted to say that when he tried to speak them he nearly suffocated!! ASLAN AND LUCY?!?! What could have possibly inspired this!! Yes,

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  8. unicorn girl

    AHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!! Yikes! I read the reveiws first, and then forced myself to read this trash so I could review it firsthand! This made me SICK. With a capital S. Aslan is a paralell for Jesus, and how could He be intrested in us ROMANTICLY of all

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  9. Beatrice

    PLEASE FOR THE SAKE OF NARNIA, FOR THE SAKE OF LOVE, PLEASE DO NOT EVER WRITE ANOTHER STORY ABOUT LUCY AND ALSAN. Caspian and Lucy ok… But Aslan/Jesus…. Or you really that slow and sad? Do not ever do another story about Alsan or another girl EVER!!!

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