Edmund reflects on Susan and her new, girly mannerisms.
| URL | http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4150646/1/When_My_Sister_Became_a_Girl |
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| Creator | Narnian Lily |
| Description | Edmund reflects on Susan and her new, girly mannerisms. |
| Complete | yes |
| Published | 03/23/2008 |
Edmund reflects on Susan and her new, girly mannerisms.
| URL | http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4150646/1/When_My_Sister_Became_a_Girl |
|---|---|
| Creator | Narnian Lily |
| Description | Edmund reflects on Susan and her new, girly mannerisms. |
| Complete | yes |
| Published | 03/23/2008 |
A good story concept, but feels a little OOC in narration. Still a fine story, be sure to check out the second chapter.
I like the story, But @pollo that was for another story!!!! And of course Narnia and Mangas do not go together! If you did Narnia would stink and so would mangas!! Apollo get your stories right!!!!!
Oh yeah sorry for ruining you reveiw page just fixing a