Oh man.... Um. How brief are the “everywhere” visits? lol. Umm. I think I’ll go with the world of Narnia. There are so many blank spaces to see. How A...

Golden age, easily. WYR learn to sail with Drinian or learn to sew with Mrs Beaver?

*snickers and high-fives you*Because of a visual cue, a lady asked if I liked Narnia, so she could tell me how her grandson came to be named Caspian. ...

@Hermit: Narnia may have forced me out of my childhood dependency on authors painting pictures for me, or at least it was a major stepping stone in th...

Okay, the Uncle Andrew one is hilariously spot-on!(I would recommend that updates be made in new posts so we can all see new stuff, and maybe even con...

@Netty: Yeah, we tend to be into a lot of things around here. :DRegarding your story character, I’d suggest giving her flaws and agency (the ability t...

Oh wow, that’s quite the story! Edmund is indeed super relatable to all those who have walked his path (and he’s a great character besides!). My favou...

It’ll be better to add on to the story as replies. That way, any comments made on the way will clearly connect to the portions of story preceding them...

Please continue to post your story in this thread. That way, it could be read as a whole later.

Hi, Netty! I’m Ariel, one of the staffers here. I’ll occasionally pop into the chat, but I’m more of a forum person. I write fanfics as well, though n...

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Interesting, brown just being taken for granted like that. Is it really cheating if that’s really how you imagine Peter, though? 😉

Ahh, exciting! (Also you and gyps being an aunt and mom, respectively. *mind-blown*)